Monday, August 4, 2008

For Him~

You make me smile
You make me laugh
You make my heart skipped a beat

You held my hands
You touched my heart
You kissed me on my cheeks

You call me
You text me
You fill my lonely nights with joy

I don't care who you are
I don't care how you look
All i wanna do is to whisper in your ears, saying
"I'm all yours"

1 comment:

Alter North said...

hye Nisa..
this kinda ok but i think you should add 1 more line for each stanza.. there should be 4 lines for each.. then you can have more impact.. btw, if you have time, check mine out and drop a comment.